Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Freedom (By Frances)

One of the many poems I've written. Click on the picture to see the whole thing.
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4 comments:

  1. AmberApril 21, 2010 at 8:38 AM

    I like this one Frances... you're so creative!

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  2. LeticiaApril 23, 2010 at 10:39 AM

    You are amazing, Frances!!! Very good!

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  3. UnknownApril 28, 2010 at 2:45 PM

    Frances, I propose a less morbid ending.
    "So if we fall down,
    let us land on soft ground"

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  4. ReallMay 1, 2010 at 11:44 AM

    I think it's more about the attitude of liberty or death. So they would want to die if they lost their freedom. Not literally falling. Not morbid.

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