Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Freedom (By Frances)

One of the many poems I've written. Click on the picture to see the whole thing.

4 comments:

  1. I like this one Frances... you're so creative!

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  2. You are amazing, Frances!!! Very good!

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  3. Frances, I propose a less morbid ending.
    "So if we fall down,
    let us land on soft ground"

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  4. I think it's more about the attitude of liberty or death. So they would want to die if they lost their freedom. Not literally falling. Not morbid.

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